小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is the english teacher.She is a very lovely teacher. She likes to help us learn english. She favorite to paly the baseball,singsong and swimming.We are very like her.Because of teacher is a very good girl. She has long hair and big mouth .She eyes is very Charming.My very like the english teacher.