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Dear Mr.Johnson Firstly, thanks for your goods(3000 pcs.) arrived on 22nd of Dec. But there are some things that we have to check: according to our signing of the No.35 order, there are 3500 pcs. in total. Now, 3000pcs of them have been received, the other 500 pieces havn't arrived yet. Pls check your compay dispatch list and give me answer. We are looking forward to your early reply! If you have any question, Please contact me derectly Best regards xx