作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
Dear Mr.Johnson Firstly, thanks for your goods(3000 pcs.) arrived on 22nd of Dec. But there is a thing that we have to check: according to our signing of the No.35 order,there are 3500 pieces in total. Up till now, 3000pieces of them have been received, the other 500 pieces havn't arrived yet. Please check of your company dispatch list and give me answer. We are looking forward to your early reply! If you have any question, don't hesitate to contact me.