回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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Dear Smith Firstly, congratulations and happy birthday to your son! I am afraid that I can't take part into the party having at hole on 10th of June. Unfortunately, because I have to soon go back to my company and solve a most crucial company matter! Thanks for your comprehension.