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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，词汇量总体偏小，注意词汇拼写的检查；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
In the previous test for Ravena project, we got some relative information and did some brief inspection of Exshaw project as following: The poject has around 3100T steel parts in total. 2000T of them were finished, and had been deliveried to Exshaw site. The other 1100T are being manufcatured at Tongli supplier and Hengyuan supplier.
