英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语三级> 模拟题> 英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:邀请信

英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:邀请信

发布时间:2013-05-22 00:12浏览次数:3130
要求:
Directions: 
This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter of reply to an invitation according to the information given in Chinese below. Remember to write the letter on the Translation/Composition Sheet. 
邀请人:王力 被邀请人:John Smith 
内容:王力及其妻子邀请John Smith夫妇来家中参加儿子一岁生日宴。时间定于6月10号下午七点在皇家饭店举行。 

回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。

【精析】 
此篇作文应为回复邀请的信函。在这类信函中要注意信的格式。时间应该写在右上角,称呼应顶格并首字母大写。正文要写清楚应邀还是拒绝,若拒绝,要写清楚理由,并向邀请人致歉。

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

 For the dispatched goods, the information I got from supplier is that the KHD separated them into 3 times. The first 2 times was in 2013 and the last time was in Mar.2014.  For the left part machined at tongli, only the thrust roller is there. It has been finished the machining, and it is qualified under KHD supervision. However the supplier hasn’t ready for packing because no related dispatch time.  The other left parts, they are mostly manufactured at Hengyuan. And now 100T of them have been manufactured and packed completely, the others are under machining. But unfortunately, till now, I havn’t got any information and plan for the next dispatch time For the packed steel parts, I can say that are satisfied after external surface check and documents revirew.  Working scheduel (After calling with supplier, we got the latest informatiom, please refer to attachment below)

会员评论0个评论)
WANGYONGYE
金币:45

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:64.0明亮的夜晚

人气:67发布:2013-05-27

得分:62.0rxwcherry

人气:102发布:2013-05-22

得分:56.0LIQUNXIAO

人气:64发布:2014-06-14

得分:52.0墨澈

人气:83发布:2014-12-12

得分:51.0while-@

人气:40发布:2013-08-27