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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦40:My Favorite Festival

发布时间:2014-07-31 17:51浏览次数:644
要求:
书面表达。源假如你是王昆,你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日“春节”非常感兴趣,请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题,写一封E-mail.,给他做一介绍。
1.要点包括:节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等;
2.字数要求:100字左右。
3.提示:the Spring Festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed in…


Subject: My Favorite FestivalFrom: Wang Kun


Dear Tom,


Wang Kun
用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Dear Tom I'm glad to receive your E-mail. My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, now i will tell you some contrditions about it. As you know, the spring festival comes after China's New Year. Before it comes, people always clean up their house, they are dressed in red. Red stands for their exciting and happiness. During the festival ,people often get together talk about their important things in last year. We also like hold a home party today, we can meet many old friends . At that day ,we will eat YuanXiao. All of us hope everyone can come back at the Spring Festival. How about your favorite festival? Yours , Wang捆

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