Subject: My Favorite FestivalFrom: Wang Kun
句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear Tom I'm glad to receive your E-mail. My favorite festival is the Spring Festival, now i will tell you some contrditions about it. As you know, the spring festival comes after China's New Year. Before it comes, people always clean up their house, they are dressed in red. Red stands for their exciting and happiness. During the festival ,people often get together talk about their important things in last year. We also like hold a home party today, we can meet many old friends . At that day ,we will eat YuanXiao. All of us hope everyone can come back at the Spring Festival. How about your favorite festival? Yours , Wang捆