2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦40:My Favorite Festival

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Dear Tom I'm glad to receive your E-mail.The Spring Festival is one of the most famous festivals in China,now I will tell you something about it. As you know, the spring festival comes after China's New Year.Before it comes, people always clean up their house,they are dressed in red.Red stands for their exciting and happiness.During the festival,people often get together to talk about their important things last year.We also like hold a home party today, we can meet many old friends and relatives.Diet acts as an important role in traditional festivals.On that day,we will eat YuanXiao.All of us hope everyone can come back at the Spring Festival. Do you have anything to ask? Yours sincerely, Wangkun