2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；请注意分段。

As a middle school student，it is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers. In my opinion,a good relationship during teachers and students is whatever things happen to students,they can ask helps from teachers.In the same,students and teachers respect each other.Maybe they can also build friendship.In order to build a good relative,all of the students and the teachers should change theirs' con-traditional ideas.Students should treat their teachers honest,on the other hand,teachers need give more care and kind to students.In my view,a good relative benefit students conmmunicate with teachers.So build a good relative during students and teachers is nursery.