一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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This day doesn't to school. This day me get up early. Because me want to help my mother or father with housework.After breakfast l open to clean home. Then l go to homework. Next Tony and l go to paly ping pong .In the night,l and my parents watch TV.This a very busy day.