2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦40:My Favorite Festival

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The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.And it is also my favorite festival. It has long history and it is a traditional festival in china.At that day,people will get toghter with families which is more likely to the Christmas in Europe.Besides, it's our tradition to clean up houses. Because people believe that it can sweep bad things from the house and hopeful for the new year.What's more, people will dressed in new clothes such as dressed in red.