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2013年2月23日雅思大作文真题:University Subject Preference

发布时间:2013-08-01 17:14浏览次数:705
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【题目要求

Not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What're the reasons for this problem?What're the effects on the society?

写作思路

有关科目设置的题基本上都是有关中小学的,如science 对比arts, 而关于大学的题目主要是讨论理论课和专业课的侧重问题,从这一点来说,这是一道新题。回答这道题首先要明确一点:不选择science的学生都转向哪里了?近年大学比较流行的专业有business, accounting, economics, nursing, computer science, communication, education. 第二点,science到底指什么?它指的是physics, chemistry, biology

第一段:science 不像以前那么流行,很多学生转向business, accounting, economics

第二段:原因有

1 难学

2 毕业后的工资不如商科高

3 实用性不高

第三段:负面影响

1 科学与物质生活的紧密联系

2 science是很多实用学科的基础

第四段:总结

用户的作文(系统评分90.0分
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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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The popularity of the subject reflects how it is seen by the job market. Large weights have been given by students to such subjects as business, economics, accounting, so and forth which means a short cut to success. On the contrary, science subjects have seen a sharp decline in their enrollments. On the one hand, the market's role to determine individual's activity is somehow undeniable, on the other hand, more incentives and policy preference should be put up to encourage the development of science in order to well serve our society. The industry of finance, computer technology, education has generated huge revenue for the economy of the day. This has a lot to do with the people's changing demand and dynamic market move, and most importantly, the science and technology progress which gave a push. That means, science plays a fundamental role in changing our lives. Granted, the market has a say on the ups and downs of one industry, as well as the future of a subject. However, Since science subjects have the potential to change our world in a revolutionary way, it's crystal clear that never can we ignore the supports toward their development. Following the market move can be a rewarding activity, not only can it bring about money, material well being, but also fame, sense of achievement. Obviously, science researcher lives a quite distinct life which is lonely, boring, less well-off. To a large extent, science research has a lot to do with interests. A highly developed society and the rational citizens will appreciate the researcher's work and morals of devotion. Granting them with respects and financial supports, is always the right thing to do for the sake of nation future. In sum, science plays a indispensable role in ensure our well-being and nation's development. We should keep an broad horizon and be generous to support its development.

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