Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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According to the figure in the line graph,it can be seen that lower unemployment rates to the high degree people,howerove high school diploma and less than high school diploma to the high unimployment rates,while obviously,that is a kind the unfair phenomenon.but why? Today,higher degree in difficulty gain,but less than high school diploma so easy acquire,so worke choose is clearly,higher degree have good work,receive very high wages in the month,in addition don't worry unemployment rates. Less than high school diploma people is very many,high unemployment rates for socially that impact.so government want sovle to thing. From what has been discussed above,we may conclude that heher degree have lower unemployment rates.