小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,he is a boy,his name is Kris,he is very clever and very cool.He has black hair,two big eyes and a red mouth.He likes running,jumping,flying kites,listening to music and reading books.We have the same hobbies. He is my classmate.We often play and do homework together,so,I like him very much.