小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

I have a good friend,he is a boy,his name is Kris,he is very clever and very cool.He has black hair,two big eyes and a red mouth.He likes running,jumping,flying kites,listening to music and reading books.We have the same hobbies.At weekend,we often talk about spring presents. He is my classmate.We often play and do homework together,so,I like him very much.