小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I have a good friend,from Australia,he is a beautiful boy,his name is Kris,he is very clever and cool. He has black hair,two big eyes and a red mouth.He likes running,jumping,flying kites,listening to music and reading books.We have the same hobbies.At weekend,we often talk about spring presents. He is my classmate.We often play and do homework together,so,I like him very much.