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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.I think we will benifit a lot from it. Not only seize an opportunity to improve our capability but also built a good relationship between our school and yours. As for me , my favorate column is ANIMALS .From this column, we can open our eyes and know how colorful the world are.We can learn the features and habits about different animals, thus, we will full in love with them and protect them. I think it's the way to lead our students pay attention on protecting animals and our family--the earth. Yours faithfully Li Hua
