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I'm so gold that my best friend Tom who come from the USA will visit me next weekend,and I will give he a happy experience in my hometown. Fist,Huangshang is the fist place we visit,as we all know that is Anhui most farmes place,we not noly go to matens but also have a good experience with food.Then,I plan go with he to go shipping,I think he would need buy some merious gift for his family,of course,the Weimingjie is best place.Last,we will go to Baogongci,I hope he can feel China history. That's all about my plan for he,and I hope he will have a happy experience.