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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71620
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句式变化多样;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。

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I'm so gold that my best friend Tom who come from the USA will visit me next weekend,and I will give he a happy experience in my hometown. Fist,Huangshang is the fist place we visit,as we all know that is Anhui most farmes place,we not noly go to matens but also have a good experience with food.Then,I plan go with he to go shipping,I think he would need buy some merious gift for his family,of course,the Weimingjie is best place.Last,we will go to Baogongci,I hope he can feel China history. That's all about my plan for he,and I hope he will have a happy experience.

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