小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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lt has a big dog.This name is dudu.DuDu is 9-year-old.DuDu is a girl. DuDu is very cute pets.My is very like to play with dudu. DuDu has two big eyes.Look like is stars.DuDu like to help me mon defend huose.DuDu very like to eat meat.DuDu like to talk walking.So l often bring dudu go to talk walking.my parents and l like very dudu.