小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?Lt has a big dog.This name is dud.DuD is 9-year-old.DuD is a girl. DuD is very cute pets.My very like to play with dud. DuD has two big eyes.Look like are stars.DuD like to help me mon defend house.DuDu very likes to eat meat.DuD like to talk walking.So l often with dud go to talk walking.My parents and l like very dud.