小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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lt has a big house.This warm house has my father,my mother,my brother ,my sister and l.My father is a great doctors.He need to help people get health. My mother is a cute teacher. she often help us student english. My brother is a high shcool student. my brother like to chat with my siterand l . my sister and l am a primary shccol student.