小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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It has a big house.This warm house has my father,my mother,my brother,my sister and l.My father is the great doctors.He needs to help people get health. My mother is a cute teacher. She often helps us student english. My brother is a high school student.My brother likes to chat with my siter and l. my sister and l am a primary shcool student.