小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

It has a big house.This warm house has my father,my mother,my brother,my sister and l.My father is the great doctors.He needs to help people get health. My mother is a cute teacher. She often helps us student english. My brother is a high school student.My brother likes to chat with my sitter and l. My sister and l am a primary school student.