高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I live in a little town which was surrounded by beautiful woods. The fish played in a cleanly river, the houses were simply and the street were not wide. Now, the buildings and the factories is full of my hometown, the kinds of car appeared in the streets. The industry has caused of the pollution so that the trees and fishes slowly disappear. Governance the pollution is a pressing matter of the moment.