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It has a warm huose.My house has my cute parents , my brother, my sister,and pets dud.ohoh,there has me.My huose is a big home.Becase has vrye much people.My parents are a teacher.They often help to us student english. so we very like english that us english results very good. my pet name is dud.It is very cute pet. we very like dud.My brother and sister is a students.They are very like to read a books.we often go to library.Becuse of has very many books.