小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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My holiday is happy.Because my spent too much time on holiday.It remembers father to with me go to rock climbing.That day is very happy.My father often say student book to help too much people.This is a good thing.SO my am hard student book in the holiday.Something l go to help old people clean home.So some people is like very me.HeHe, my also like them.My holiday is a good and happy.