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小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:46浏览次数:3104
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用英语描述下我的假期,字数在100字以内.
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单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少;请注意分段。

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My holiday is happy.Because my spent too much time on holiday.It remembers father to with me go to rock climbing.That day is very happy.My father often say student book to help too much people.This is a good thing.SO my am hard student book in the holiday. Because my want to help oldest people get happy day.I think of me is line.So My parents often with me go to oldest people house to help them read a books. Something l goes to help old people to clean home.So some people is like very me. It also likes them.My holiday is a good and happy.

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