2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中简单句过多，建议增加长句；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

i think a good relationship is like a good friend .make us comfortable. sometimes, we will hate our teachers.so we can't build a good relationship.but what should we do to build a good relationship? first,we should like teachers. then,after class we can talk their . last, we must accomplish teachers give us homework. also,you are ought to react when teachers ask questions.