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Comprehension of this passage naturally develops a definite conclusion of different attitudes towards music between mid-aged people and young people.As we all know, most people have an appetite for music throughout the world.However, along with the fantastic development of culture and economic, nowadays young people begin to show enthusiasm for pop stars like F4.As for them, pop stars can earn a lot of money.They lead interesting and luxurious lives on an easy basis and win high reputation, loved by thousands of crazy fans. In our life, influenced by pop stars, young people put great passion on pop different kinds of pop music like rock music, R