湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

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as we know,shopping online become more and more popular as the internet technology develop gradually.and that is causing shopping online become a kind of fashion. of course,going shopping online has many advantage.you can stay at home,and then,you will get something what you want.it is very convenient and helpful.the disadvantage is obvious,too.maybe you will get something is bad.maybe you will be cheated online or get something isn't you want.