2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I live in old town which surounded by beautiful woods. It is beauty spots and i liove it very much. Zhangjiajie is very famous and beautiful spots where always appeal so many people to pay a visit. if you want to go, you will find beautiful sight in front of your eye. And the water is so clean and green, everyone always drink this water who live in here.