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Wherever I traveled in public vocation, I found myself burred in a large density of tourists, blocking the road and ruining my mood. Besides the bad effect on individual feeling, the crowded people also lead to another severe issue: protection of the tourism district. This problem can be caused by the tourist, the tourism administration, and the residents living around the place of interest. Tourists, the main participants of tourism, do harm to the heritage and natural environment most directly as well as in different ways. Plastic bags are left behind after the camping. Antique historic buildings are carved by knife with tourists names. The buzzing of the crowded people may disturb the calm life of animals. The tourism should also be blamed because of their inappropriate arrangement and lack of protection rules and equipment. Meanwhile, the original residents living there are also involved for the irresponsible commercial activity. To solve the problem, measures should be taken in different aspects. First, every citizen should be educated about the importance and the methods of becoming a civilized traveler. Second, good preparation, including strict rules and protecting equipment , should be made by the tourism administration before the place of interest is open and advertised to the public. Last but not least, commercial activities should be legislated and constrained. Local people need to be aware of the fact that awash commercial activities lead to excessive demand from the environment which is the crucial factor that will destroy their home one day.
