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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第41篇:为什么学生会选择出国留学

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:00浏览次数:2793
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作文题目:

Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?

Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

很多学生会选择出国上大学。这是为什么呢?给出原因并作出解释。

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用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用。

用户练习作文:

study aboard with the rapid development of technology and economy,our living conditions becoming better and better.thus more and more younger choose to study aboard. there are so many factors which cause this phenomenon as following. first of all,parents want to offer an as good as possible condition to their children for growing up. besides going aboard is turn to become a trend in the modern world,everyone would try their best to catch the trend.what's more,not only can you experience another country's culture by study aboard.but also you are able to know another educational system and attain a different knowledge in your field.at last but not least,in a long vision of your future,study aboard could contribute some advantages for your career. above all has mentioned,as a teenager if i have any chance to study aboard,i will catch it without hesitate .

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