2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(03):留守儿童

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用。

Don’t leave kids behind According to incomplete statistics，there are more than 22 million of rural children throughout the country, who was left at home with relatives while their parents work in urban areas． For lack of the necessary parent care,these kids are more likely to be lost in their life.For example,they are easy to feel lonely and unhappy.Also,they may won't have problems in their physical and mental health,and even have to face psychologically problems.Because of these ,they are usually tired of study,which is harmful to themselves. However, the worst thing is that they are unsafe in remote villages,since there are many natural disasters.Such as when a flood hit a small village of Hunan province,there are 11 children who absented parents of the 12 dead kids.