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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17584
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

I am agree with the statement of "Snap judgments can never be trusted". Most of situations are complex including the background, the logical relationship of the events and the position of people who delivery the judgments. Firstly, we should consider the background for specific event. Like the cases or projects we work on them, we should consider the local culture, do the marketing research, and communicate with our clients to confirm which issues are significants. Even we are experts for one industry, the experience do accelerate the process we solve the issue, but we still cannot delivery any snap judgments. Secondly, any result has the unique logical reason, almost everything will go through long and complex precess to get the destination. Things change every time. Any different choice or external influence may change the path of the development of things. For example, like some psychological tests, there are several multiple options and different results. People may choose the different path but get the same answers, so even we can have the result it does not mean we can snappy judge out the right path and reason why they do their choices. Thirdly, the position and ability of people who do the judgement is also important. People are intelligent to solve problem, it means some judgement may have some prospection for things will happen. For the more, the ability of people may limit judgements. So, considering the reasons of above, I prefer to agree with the statement of "Snap judgement can never be trusted."

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