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Last weekend,I interviewed psychological professer Kelly Lam about chinese students` opinon concerning sharing feelings.Then we came to a conclusion that whatever happy or upset,up to thirty percent students are unwilling to share it with others.Apart from this,it is obvious that our education doesn`t make students aware of the signficance of sharing.Expert Kelly Lam supposed that all of us should learn to share,for it is of great importance to share in the generation we live in.Besides,being able to share does good to our growing in the future.
