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Last weekend,I interviewed psychology professor Kelly Lam about the students` recommendation concerning sharing. In China,over 30% students are unwilling to share.Besides,it is conspicuous that education doesn`t make students aware of the significance of sharing. Kelly supposed that we learn to share,for it is of great importance to share in the present generation.Also,being capable to share is advantageous to growing in the future.
