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Because eating with parents makes us happy,and the kind is a lot of.The dining table sit wall-to-wall people,make the atmosphere comfortable.It's good for us to relax.What's more,can let us hair down and reduce in hot water with others.Also,we can add each other authentic.And it's could to next time eat again. So eating with parents makes you healthier.