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Eating with parents makes you healthier I believe eating with parents will make teenagers healthier. First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy. Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life. The dinner time is just a chance for communication. Also, home-made meals are healthier for us to eat, for the food problem seems more and more serious now. As for me, I have dinner with my parents every day. My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us.
