2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文中句子偏简单，可增加从句使用量；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Nowadays,many peoples like on online shopping. Whatever is young or older,them both like buy goods by this way.There are becoming fashion by online shopping. Not only bring convenience to people,but also people can buy some goods when at home. But some people have different views. Them think that some goods not good plenty online.You can't saw goods if it not good. It can bring some consume question. In my opinion,I agree on online shopping.With the develop of the social, people haven't time to shopping in the shop.We can buy every goods on online. What's more,it don't spend some time.I have some advise to on online shopping.I hope that the government promise provide to on online shopping.