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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

How to succeed in a job interview? According to a survey shows that graduates have increased today.It also means that society's stress has become part of daily life.So if you want to get a good job,interview is neccessary. For a job interview,it may change your whole life.Because those campany's leader can understand you by interview whether you adapt to this job.Meanwhile you also can better show yourself by interview.So as a job finder,you should grasp this good chance. However,how to succeed in a job interview?This is a good question.In the coarse of interview,it is very important for you have a good appearance.Because the leader is first time to see your appearance.Second,your behaviour and talking,the leader can see what you are by your behaviour ang talking.Next,your ability and knowledge is very important.Knowledge is based on job that you choose.Finally,of course is confindence,success is not far.So handle five points,we can better face interview.

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