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careful and reasonable to spend money Nowadays,Most of us mainly take money of our parents because we have no ability to make money.Just because of this,as a student,we should careful with our money in daily life. Of course,on the premise of saving money,we should learn to reasonable to spend money.For example,we can collect all kinds of coupons ,this is a great extent,we can spend little money than original cost. Besides,most of us always buy clothes every year,but some students can buy clothes that have low price but bad quality.However,this clothes only dress one year because of bad quality.In the second year,we buy new clothes again. In this situation,we should buy clothes that have higher price but good quality.It can dress for several years. In my idea,I think as a student,we should save spend money,but at the same time ,we should also learn to reasonable to spend money.