题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
学术词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。
With the development of economy,people can more better communicate than the ancient society by telephone and computer. People don't often talk but playing games. Communication is very important in the modern society.It can make people acquiring interpersonal trust and being full of happiness.Let's put down telephone and chat with each other!