题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
学术词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。
With the development of economy,people can more better communicate than the ancient society by telephone and computer. People don't often talk but play games. Communication is very essential in the modern society.It can make people acquire interpersonal trust and be full of happiness.Let's put telephone down and chat with each other!