2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hello,my foreign friend,welcome to china,guangzhou,my hometown,which is well-known as the FLOWERS CITY. Now,let me intreducte it to you.guangzhou city have a population of one-hundred-thousand and have a long histery.The econemy of guangzhou is very prosperous,and guangzhou city become the centre of financial econemic.The tourism isvery popular at there,and every summer there come more than a millions visitor. I think there is a good place to come and I can garantee that you will fall in with this city.