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Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文中用词稍显贫乏；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。
In 1990 my school was build up,which is have 48 teach classes and 280teachers and 3200 students.The building can include more 60 classes.About 20 million in the library. Science and technology museum have a lot of physical and chemical laboratories and four Voice of the classrooms.Now,i am in High class four.We learn subject has a lot of ,but especially to learn Chinese match English and physical chemical computer.I am good at English and computer.Other time i like listening to music swimming and skating.
