2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

With the development of society that computer has been widely used.It's very important that internet is widely used by many people in their daily life.May women like shopping in the internet,because they can purchase anything there,For example:Clothing、Books、Handbags、Fruit、Shoes ect. I like on online shopping too. Because I think it is very convenient and quick and have more the variety of produce.Therefore the online shopping have more advantages,but it will take some risks to us.We can know that the quality of produce can't be ensured on internet,even if we may buy some fakes. In my opinion,We must keep our mind clearly and buy right things.