2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。

Which gets the conclusion immediately while see and listen. The truth is a conclusion, isn't a process. We get an information is just a part of the whole truth maybe.We must have different directions of perspective to observe the things.This is a story, that there is an elephant in the space, and several blind.We let the blind touch the elephant and then tell their feel what they get. Someone say this is a post,and the other say is an fan,and other say is a whip. The elephant likes the things we went, but is so long that we can get an part we think the whole.