英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 考研英语> 预测> 2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13050
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

As we all know, communication plays an important role in our life.When we buy somethings ,we need communicate. when we want others agree with us ,we also need communicate. In my opinion,the meaning of communication can divide into three parts.Firstly,communication can motivate cooperation.If you want to begin you business ,you need a lot of money.How can you earn that money is the basic of you success.At these time ,you can communicate with you friends,families and so on,and if they agree with you ,you can have enough money to do what you want to do.Secondly, communication enlarge our knowledge.As the saying goes, you have a apple ,i have a apple .if we change ,we both have a apple . you have a thinking,i have a thinking .if we change ,we both have two thinkings.finally,communication can make live in a harmonious society.if we communicate with each others before we do everything,we can decrease some confliction. In a word ,we need communication.

会员评论0个评论)
后会无期215
金币:2

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:89.5yutao2011

人气:68发布:2013-09-02

得分:88.0614545496

人气:33发布:2016-05-16

得分:87.5liwanli

人气:55发布:2014-05-23

得分:87.5watermelonding

人气:45发布:2014-08-01

得分:87.0gaaexercise

人气:45发布:2014-03-02