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the two ways have their own advantages ,going to school by bus ,it can save the time ,and also can save our strength ,however it can train our bodies by bicycle ,it is convenience ,too . in my opinion ,i like going to school by bicycle ,because that can see the beautiful sights beside the road slowly ,and can share the fresh air in the morning ,and it have no pollutant ,that is all my opinion ,but everyone has own ideas .
